It's still Tuesday June 30, 2009 Here's a poem I freestyled earlier this morning entitled Reality leave your comments please.
"Reality"
Life is such a sweet confusion
order not real just illusion
chaos rules and humans suffer
about to crash without a buffer.
The foolish flaws of selective societies
the coiling caress of selective anxieties.
Let everyone tell there own truth
break the bonds f the innocent youth
Set reality free of all constraints
proclaim the arrival of the new saints.
When everything means nothing at all
when all succumb to the final call.
Only then shall reality be redefined
the inheritance of a new mind!
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kewl poem..desmondis poetic ...i see...how old are you???
ReplyDeletelol yeah I like to throw in a couple of poems in every now and then...Im 13
ReplyDeleteFeeling this nice style. Great creativity for someone your age.
ReplyDeletethe poem is great. respect.
ReplyDeleteThanks guys
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